First Draft of Double Page Spread

This is my first double page spread. I have chosen this image because I like the relaxed feel to it and I think it’s fits in well with my genre. I have used inserts to help back up my story.

My Targets

• Unclear which is the headline
• Stand first needs to be in bold
• byline…?
• reorder page numbers
• insets need captions and borders?
• main photo needs photoshop filter