What’s different;

• The image used is different
• Segmented into different graphic boxes
• I’ve added a circle (like a halo/crown) around the star to signal they’re the one being interviewed. Their name is also specified.
• I’ve added in the actual article instead of placeholder text.

Targets;

• More variation with graphics
• Make the stars stand out a bit more- I could even add an outline around him/them
• I want to restructure the spread, rearranging some of the layout and text.
• The 2nd page (left) is quite empty; I need to add some more text/graphics.
• Drop capital for where the article starts
• Smaller page numbers in size but larger in quantity as DPS would be further on from this
• The standfirst – the opening to the article needs to stand out and give more information than the headline so make it bolder, bigger and near the main headline.
• Is the main headline King (J)? And if so you need it to make more sense…add some play on words…King J pots the black on the MTV awards?
• the two boxes of copy vary in width which is unusual so why not put it all in two columns?
• could cut the photo in half so that you have white space across the spread in top half for all the copy to go
• why the circle over his head?