We have finished our second draft, at 2:31 minutes.

However, there are many things we must reflect on

Before this, I will list positives

Positives

• Firstly, our edit-to-the-beat was spot on- in certain places.
• Jump-cuts utilised well
• Variety of shots and angles
• Different locations
• Clear narrative

Targets for Improvement

• Lip-Sync not used often- and what is, is often off-beat
• Editing generally bland, but this is an effect of being the second draft
• While there is a variety of shots and angles, there is room for more