What has changed:

Based on feedback given to us by Lenny from the Creative Department at Specsavers, we have adjusted our narrative by adding more transition shots, POVs, and filling the blanks, as well as adding filters and effects to the overall video.

Receiving more feedback from peers, we have reflected, and will act upon it in our following drafts

Here are screenshots of such (Improvement) points;

Going forward, our target improvements are;

• Add and match more lip sync
• Have a more conclusive ending
• Ensure video quality is standard
• Adding more variety in camera angles and positioning (such as mid/long-shot)
• Focus on transitions/overall editing