What’s different;
- The image used is different
- Segmented into different graphic boxes
- I’ve added a circle (like a halo/crown) around the star to signal they’re the one being interviewed. Their name is also specified.
- I’ve added in the actual article instead of placeholder text.
Targets;
- More variation with graphics
- Make the stars stand out a bit more- I could even add an outline around him/them
- I want to restructure the spread, rearranging some of the layout and text.
- The 2nd page (left) is quite empty; I need to add some more text/graphics.
- Drop capital for where the article starts
- Smaller page numbers in size but larger in quantity as DPS would be further on from this
- The standfirst – the opening to the article needs to stand out and give more information than the headline so make it bolder, bigger and near the main headline.
- Is the main headline King (J)? And if so you need it to make more sense…add some play on words…King J pots the black on the MTV awards?
- the two boxes of copy vary in width which is unusual so why not put it all in two columns?
- could cut the photo in half so that you have white space across the spread in top half for all the copy to go
- why the circle over his head?