We have finished our second draft, at 2:31 minutes.
However, there are many things we must reflect on
Before this, I will list positives
Positives
- Firstly, our edit-to-the-beat was spot on- in certain places.
- Jump-cuts utilised well
- Variety of shots and angles
- Different locations
- Clear narrative
Targets for Improvement
- Lip-Sync not used often- and what is, is often off-beat
- Editing generally bland, but this is an effect of being the second draft
- While there is a variety of shots and angles, there is room for more