My Complete Music Magazine Draft:
My Teachers Feedback:
Improvements I need to make:
Front Page:
- Fix Masthead from changing when exported into Google Drive.
- Some empty space above and below the ‘Exclusive Tyler Q’ part.
- ‘Tyler Q’ could stand out more from the rest of the text (could be achieved with the use of effects and colours.)
Contents Page:
- Could possibly add some white to the page.
- Need more than 6 articles on there.
- Black clothes from Jacob and Tyler on the black background needs to change, (could be achieved by using glow effects or strokes).
Double Page Spread (DPS):
- Must write my article urgently. (No.1 Priority).
- Could widen my columns.
- Page Numbers.
- Must make my pull quote smaller than my headline.
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