After making our photo mock-up of our digipak we got feedback from our peers by showing them the mock-up and discussing the readings they got from it, we made this in a tally table for the questions we asked them. We now know what works and doesn’t work to get the preferred reading.

Here is a summary of the feedback:

• The broken instruments fit with the genre and clearly revealed the broken themes
• The cracks across the girls face were effective
• The red colour palette used throughout the products appealed to them
• It would be interesting to explore some more themes as well as brokenness
• The symbolism of the doll was lost, we will make this clearer by designing it to resemble the star.