My self assessment:

T – My use of terminology was overall quite good.

E – I used good examples from the sequence and used images to clinically analyse what Del Toro did.

A – Analysis is good but to improve I need to ask the questions such as so what. For example I could have asked ‘What does Del Toro gain by doing this?’ and ‘What themes/issues does he import from War movies that aren’t in fantasy films?’

S – To improve I could have done a more detailed conclusion in order to summarise.