Feedback

The feedback I have received is telling me that I need to add transitions so it doesn’t feel like a bad cut, I need to colour correct the whole thing to make the thriller darker and somehow cut out graffiti as it is too modern.

Based on this feedback I have added transitions onto the points said above and though I was not able to get rid of the graffiti I have placed a title to the left of it to distract the audience from it. I have also added a tint all over to colour correct.