This is my first proper Draft for my thriller. It includes for refined edits so there is a story that is noticeable and not just a narrative.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4sipZsQPI1k
This is some feedback I have received for my thriller.
Good points:
- Uses great mise-en-scene
- Has a good continuity
- Good match on action
- Doesn’t brake 180 degree rule
Bad points:
- The boat scene needs to be shorter
- There is an obvious relationship between the characters
- Some shots are slightly too long
- There needs to be a transition at the end
When re-editing my thriller I will take these points into account and edit accordingly. For instance I will make the boat scene shorter and add a fade to the ending.