First digital mock up – Advert feedback

Our overall feedback was very positive and useful. We asked 10 people what they thought of our digital mock up. This feedback has enabled us to create a set of targets that we need to complete to get to the next stage of in completing our advert.

• Centre the picture.
• Writing is too small on the ‘out now’ – make it bigger.
• The star rating, review, ‘out now’ and ‘island’ are too squashed together, spread them out.
• Close the gap between ‘X Ambassadors’ and the image.
• Lower the website url
• Add more music sites such as Spotify.

We have produced these targets based on our feedback so after we make these changes I believe that we will be finished our advert and be able to move on.