Here is my new and improved double page spread. I have taken on board the feedback I was given and changed the page number to the bottom right of the page as well as added in captions for the images to inform the reader. I also changed the line spacing to make the columns more uniform and easy to read. The biggest change I made was to the colour scheme, I referred back to my 1950’s mood board and found a colour swatch that made my double page spread more interesting and vibrant.