Here is my new improved magazine draft that I have completed after listening to my teacher’s past feedback.

My teachers last improvements she believes I need to make are:

FRONT PAGE

• Make cover lines more bold to stand out more to the reader.
• Add lines to pug to make it more interesting and detailed.
• The spacing between “Confidence is key” should be closer together.

CONTENTS PAGE

• Photos need captions to know who they are.
• Only need one Kira K picture.
• Numbers to pages in green or purple.

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

• Add more quotes in remaining boxes on top of main picture.
• Justify text to the right in the boxes.
• Tone down opacity of background as it makes the text hard to read.
• Make page numbers a larger number.