DPS-
What’s new?
- Removed the ‘pg’ in the page number
- Put a drop capital at the begging of the article
- Edited any spelling mistakes and removed any dashes
What is next?
- Remove the lines underneath the paragraphs
- Drop shadow the vinyl images
- Zoom in on the photo of my model, to make her more visible
- Outline the text boxes
CONTENTS PAGE-
What’s new?
- Changed the ‘contents’ title to a different font
- Changed the font of the text in the boxes
- Added circles to place the page numbers in
- Changed the layout of the boxes so that they weren’t covering the model
- Added a title that labels the model and advertises her page in the magazine
- Changed the font of the page number to match the other page numbers
What’s next?
- Change the spacing because it’s uneven
- Highlight certain words to make them stand out
- Check spelling
- Take ‘contents’ over the boarder
- Fit a couple more coverlines in
FRONT COVER-
What’s new?
- Changed the picture of the model- to one with edited makeup and better cut out
- Added a pink translucent line across the masthead
- Changed the stroke on the masthead to make the black outline thicker and stand out more
- Added more text t0 fill it out
- Changed the fonts of some of the coverlines
What’s next?
- Change the proportions of my front cover star, to make her look less stretched out
- Make the masthead bigger and centre it
- Spread out coverlines and make them white
- Add more coverlines on the right side of the page
- Move “£7.99” to the right corner
- Include issue number and date
- Move the plug
In order to improve on my magazine I will watch the screen castify below and add anything my teacher suggests would make it better: