My targets from feedback…
Front cover…
- move the main mast head as the bar code is covering part of one of the letters.
- mover pug lower down
Contents…
- change the photos at the bottom to a white block with photos from the shoot
- fix the line spacing
- expand on the girl band “who are they?”
- possibly add an editorial if there is still excess space
Double Page Spread…
- move photography by to the other side
- hyphenate the article
- on the first question change the line spacing so that the graphic line isn’t as close to the font
- justification of paragraphs
- stand first bolder and bigger
- align top of columns