For my second draft of my music magazine front cover I have changed a few things in order to make my magazine more successful. I have changed the subtitles to make them to do with music instead of beauty which is what they previously were as it is a music magazine so the content has to fit that. I also added some colored circles in clusters on parts of the page to make it more interesting, colorful and fit the genre of pop better.

I still need to improve a few more things so that my magazine cover can consist of as many magazine convections as possible, in order to make it as successful as it can be. Firstly, I need to add a price next to the barcode so that my audience and anyone buying my magazine can know how much they’re paying. I also need to make the spacing even in-between each of my subtitles to make it look more neat and professional . I also need to change some of the text as I accidently put some of it in bold. Once I improve on these things many magazine cover will look professional and will appeal to my target audience, making it popular and successful.