For my second draft of my contents page I improved a few things in order to make my magazine a success. I made all the text the same boldness as before a couple were in bold and some weren’t. I also added a coloured drop shadow to the title, making it stand out more4 and adding a pop of colour. I then changed the page numbers to chronological order to make it more professional and easier to read for the audience.

Moving on to my third draft of my contents page I will add something unique and different in the spare spaces, without making the page too chaotic and hard to read. I will add some more cover lines so that there is more to access for my audience and will be something that entertains and interests everyone. So that my magazine is ‘the same but different’ and stand out from other magazines, increasing the popularity.