front cover:

What’s new:

For my front cover, I changed the cover lines and created them in all different styles and designs, this can show my audience which of the stories are the biggest and most popular as they will be shown as more bold on my cover, making the biggest stories easily assessable to my audience. I also added a price onto my cover so that the consumers know how much they’re paying for my product.

What’s next:

• add addition number
• Names of other artists that will be shown in the magazine
• extra colors on the subtitles

contents page:

What’s new:

For my contents page I improved a few things. Firstly, I added more cover lines so that my audience has more of a variety of stories and entertainment. I also changed the shadow on the title making it look more 3D and it now appeals to the right age category of my audience, where as on my draft 2 it was too childish for the demographics of my audience.

What’s next:

• make page number bigger on Izzy
• Add insert imagine either on contents or double page spread

Double page spread:

What’s new:

For my double page spread, I added some colored shapes in the corners of the page to add a pop of color and make it more fit to my genre. I added my article and changed the font to a handwritten one so it seems more personal and like the artist had written it herself, making the audience feel more connected to the artist. I also made the title bigger so that it stands out, making it clear to my audience that she is the star and the focus is on her. I also added a quote from the artist making the target audience feel closer to her.

What’s next:

• Get rid of shapes
• add insert image
• add by line
• put page numbers in order to contents page
• make the quote brighter