First Draft:

Self Assessment:

Three Things I like:

• The use of the splash tool to add extra detail
• The alliteration within the headline
• The size and rotation of the main image

Five Things I Need To Improve:

• Less use of the splash tool to make it less busy.
• Fill the writing in with my magazines article
• Add extra detail and possible images
• Include a byline
• make the details underneath the healines to be staright and possibly add extra colours.