My 2nd Draft:

What’s New?

Changes I have made on my contents page are:

• The rearrangement of the coventions to make it more intresting and detailed.
• I have added an extra coverline allowing the page to provide more details and information for the audience.
• I have also changed the main photo to fit the page better as it worked around the text.
• It includes extra photos as well as a quote to make it more intresting for the reader as well as giving an insight to the magazine.

What’s Next?

Further improvements I could make to my contents page could be:

• Finish the album review in bottom left or change to a different convention.
• Add more designs to make it stand out but keep it simple.
• Experiment with different colours amongst the page as well as fonts to make the design more intresting.