Front Cover:

What’s New?

• I have added a wider variety of colours to allow certain details to stand out as well as making the cover more intresting.
• Some of the coverlines have been changed to fit the music genre better.
• I have played with fonts and sizings to add extra design to the magazine cover.
• A price has also been added as well as a music note design to add extra graphics.

Contents Page:

What’s New?

• Within the double page spread I have added extra coverlines to fill the space as well as giving more detail to the audience.
• I have played with the sizings of the fonts to give extra design making certain key words stand out.
• I have also added drop shadow to certain objects to help the design.

Double Page Spread:

 

What’s New?

• On my double page spread I have changed the background design to a more simple one helping to keep the attention on the cover star and article.
• I have added extra designs such as music notes to add an extra touch and design.
• The article has been made smaller in order to minimise the space it takes up.
• A quote has been added for further detail.
• The masthead has also been made larger to make sure it stands out.

Mrs Cobb’s Screen Castify With Suggested Feedback:

• To move the cover star to the other side in order to have more room for coverlines.
• Move the main cover line doen to crete more room.
• Change the colour of the box behind the coverline, “Secrets to songwriting”.
• Move barcode to the right as well as the price.
• To add a plug for the magazine at the top explaining what the magazine does.
• Change the background of the contents page in order to make sure there isn’t too much pink.
• Make the imge bigger on the contents page.
• Add a page number to the contents page.
• Within the coverlines on contents page continue the theme of certain words standing out.
• Add s caption too the stars on the contents page.
• Make sure all numbers correspond.
• Experiment with colours on the contents page.
• Add captions to the smaller images.
• Attach PDF’s to blog.
• Make the standfirst visible on the double page spread.
• Make title bigger on double page spread.
• Add drop shadow to background behind cover star.
• Make sure the star image on double page spread is known.