First Draft:
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/freyalenoury/files/2021/12/draft-1-dps-1-1024x724.jpg)
Self Assessment:
Three Things I like:
- The use of the splash tool to add extra detail
- The alliteration within the headline
- The size and rotation of the main image
Five Things I Need To Improve:
- Less use of the splash tool to make it less busy.
- Fill the writing in with my magazines article
- Add extra detail and possible images
- Include a byline
- make the details underneath the healines to be staright and possibly add extra colours.