My 2nd Draft:

What’s New?

For my second draft of my magazines front cover I have made some improvements to make the dsign work better and easier to read:

• I have added extra coverlines however have still kept it simplistic to make the design the ‘same but different’ as this is typically seen on an Indie Alternative magazine.
• Another change I have also made is that the coverlines have bceome more conventional as I have moved the image slightly to create room for the writing and have taken away the purple circle to make it more ‘magazine like’.
• To make the cover more intresting I have added more colours within the writing to make key points stand out to it’s targeted audience helping them to know what will be included within the magazine.

What’s Next?

Future improvements I can make:

• Add extra coverlines without the magazine cover getting too crowded as the Indie style is typically seen to be simplistic.
• I could also experiment with different colours for the backgrounds and writings to see what works best as well as adding small details like the magazines selling price.
• Another convention which could change would be the main coverline moving down the page slightly I order to make sure the cover star is not covered.