What has changed:

• We have added more punchbag shots
• Changed certain placements of shots
• Made more of the narrative black and white
• Played with the colour of the performance shots

We then had a pair of media students look at our Draft 4

Our peers feedback included:

• Looking more at the colours and playing with the saturation of shots
• Look at the van in one of the shots and position the shot better
• They think the narrative is clear
• The performer fits the song
• The lipsyncing is on the beat

Our targets moving forward include:

• Looking at each shot and the saturation we use and so the performance looks consistent throughout
• Scale and fit some shots so that there is a better depth of field
• Look at some effects and if they are needed throughout