Here is the feedback we received for draft 4 of our music video, I was really happy with the response from Kit and Marcus because they were really positive and gave us extremely helpful criticism.
Positive feedback:
*The title looks good
*I like the plane sound effect
*Great editing, really liked the editing of monochrome to colour transition
*Proxemics of the band are really good
*Like the idea of the time lapse
Negative feedback:
*A little out of time when the star is in a close up.
*Speed up the pace of the edit slightly
*Quicker transitions
*Not enough close ups on instruments.
Targets:
*Align the singing and lyrics in time
*Quicker editing techniques and faster paced
*more close ups into the instruments