Above is our forth draft of out music video, we previously had screen classify feedback which we have considered and interpreted when editing this draft. To gain the best outcome we can, we have changed.
- Add more montage
- To change the first clip of Vista
- Closer to the performers in the clips to connect with them
- Shorten the picky back clip
- Edit to beat better
- Connect with the boys more
We were then partnered up with a media student from the other class, to exchange videos and peer mark each others work. This benefitted us as it was fresh eyes that had never watched the video before, so they could notice all the errors and changes we could make to improve our video for our final draft.
Other feedback Freya suggested was –
Pros
- Your MES fits well with the lyrics within the song and represents the summer atmosphere well.
- You have a good variety of shot distances and angles throughout helping to keep interest.
- Your editing to the beat is good when the verses change.
- The performers are confident in their acting and lyrics.
Cons
- You could maybe add in some more filters and transitions to keep the excitement.
- Throughout some shots you could use keyframes to zoom into shots or change the position to make it seem as if you have more shots when it is for a long duration of the same sequence.
- Add in some more narrative if you have extra clips.
Over all I would like to improve our jump cut to make it more clear there is three different transitions, also I would like to add a filter to gave a hippy, retro vibe over the whole video to complete the finishing look we are aiming for. Having this feedback has given us options to improve in area we hadn’t even noticed ourselves.