Designers and creatives from Specsavers came into Sixth form to kindly have a look at our work, They suggested that we shortened some of our clips to keep it more interesting for our target audience and change it up a bit. They also suggested we added a filter over our whole music video to add a more vintage look and to fit into our genre better.
They also provided there knowledge within the editing sector and help smoothen out where we cut the rap out making it sound as if we hadn’t cut the rap out and making it nice and smooth.
Here is miss Cobbs screen classify to help us upgrade out next draft she suggested we:
- Add more montage
- To change the first clip of Vista
- Closer to the performers in the clips to connect with them
- Shorten the picky back clip
- Change the sky fonts to the same brightness’s
- Add another jump cut
- Edit to beat better
- Connect with the boys more