A New Improved Front Page

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Second Draft

I definitely prefer this cover to my previous one as the image better fits the mise en scene. I think that it fits with the indie genre as the colour palette is pastel and the fonts give a carefree and nostalgic vibe. To improve my front cover the changes I made were:

  • Changed my cover star photo
  • Changed the font for the cover lines
  • Got rid of the pug
  • Changed the background colour
  • Added cover lines

Even though this is a big improvement their are still things that I want to do to improve it. These include:

  • Changing the positioning and size of the issue number and date
  • Moving “the future issue” either at the top of the front page or in from the edge
  • Change some fonts so that they fit together collectively
  • Add something to the masthead to make it stand out more

These changes will hopefully make my target audience have a preferred reading to my front cover and will make them want to pick up my magazine.

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