This is my second draft for the contents page of my jazz magazine ‘Lounge’. I used the feedback from my first draft and made some alterations to improve the quality.
WHAT’S NEW:
- Added a piano keys theme to portray the genre more
- Used a photo of another model in the inset image
- Changed the white in ‘must see’ and ‘exclusive’ to yellow
- Changed the colour of the background from white to pink
- Added a shadow to the star image
- Made the ‘contents’ title bigger
- Changed the interviewee from ‘Joey Jazz Jr’ to ‘Dark October
WHAT’S NEXT:
- Look at line spacing as no coherancy
- More coverlines
- Caption the inset…who is he? make slightly smaller? – add a filter?
- Caption the main image?
- Numbers bigger?
- Dont mask his sax as that is important
- Another yellow sub heading to make it 3
- Bold 100 to make it stand out and a different font?
- Contents page needs a number?
- Editors note?