This is my updated draft of my magazine front page. I made changes from the feedback I received to create a better front page as it is crucial that my front page attracts the attention of potential customers.
WHAT’S NEW:
New cover star image which includes a new background colour
New masthead font and centered the masthead
Added another cover line to fill blank space
Edited pug to center the text more to look more professional
Slightly altered the shape of the pug to be more circular
Changed the colour of ‘hall of fame’ from light blue to white
WHAT’S NEXT:
Angle the pug
Numbers in pug a different colour
Coverlines move to the left a little
Make masthead bigger
Make him larger
Is the photo manipulated enough in photoshop
Try the typewriter font for some of the smaller lines
Something at the bottom
Move barcode to the right and pug to the left
Capital I for issue
what about a sax logo somewhere?