Above is my improved contents page.

What did I need to improve on?

• Fill the empty space
• Insert page numbers to the different articles
• Insert more text for the article titles

What did I do?

I put borders around the two inset images at the bottom, I think this makes it look more professional and makes them stand out a bit more. I added the page number at the bottom left of the page. I also added more articles which in a real magazine, would show it is packed with information the consumer would enjoy reading. Likewise I added page numbers so realistically it would be easier for the consumer to find the important pages. I also changed the font for the article titles as the one i use originally was difficult to read.