Whats new and whats changed?

Throughout my entire magazine I haven’t drastically changed anything. I’ve added in minor details such as borders around images and on the contents page to fill space. I made sure to keep the theme the same throughout otherwise it wouldn’t look as professional as it could. I also added in things I had previously forgotten to add such as page numbers and a byline. I just touched up most of it. For example, on my DPS, I just moved the text and image across so they wouldn’t be in the fold of the page. I didn’t feel like I needed to change much.

This is the Screencastify I have been given from my teacher on how I can improve my magazine even better.

 

What do I need to do now?

Front Cover:

• Take away one inset image as there is too much going on.
• Get rid of some text as there is too much

Contents Page:

• Make the boxes with different article titles in them the same size
• Change the font so it isn’t the same as the headline on the front cover

Double Page Spread:

• Change the background colour as all 3 pages look very similar
• Only use one drop capital, make sure my columns are the same size
• Make sure the consumer can see everything on the page, nothing is cut off