I got my friend Lewis have a look at my draft above. He pointed out a few things:
- The image might be too dark
- You cant see the models
- No page numbers
- The images focuses too much on the window
- weight the font less
He also said some positive things like:
- He likes the font
- He also like the colour scheme and font size
- The layout are also good
After the feedback I have set myself some things to change in my second draft. I will add pages numbers, I will also play around with font , I will change the the image to one that still fits my genre but makes the DPS much better and clearer and finally I will possibly change the page layout.