Overall I am happy with my final pages and I think I have created a clean and good looking music magazine. After I received my most recent feedback I made the following changes.
For my front cover I improved my masthead and overall layout of the page. For my DPS I improved the image by cutting out the background, brightening it up and making it less grainy. Finally for my contents page I competently changed the look and layout from a very basic and poor looking contents page into a good looking contents page with a good colour scheme and I think it looks good.
These are my complete music magazine pages.