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This is my first draft for my front cover of my magazine. I asked my peers what they thought of it and this is the response I recieved:

• move the right hand inset down so it doesn’t obstruct the face or the masthead
• make the plug larger to attract the audience more
• experiment with different colour and texture background
• cut out the model’s hair more
• the fonts are effective and suited to the genre
• the layout is conventional to the genre

So to improve my frist draft I will:

• experiement with my background colour
• change the colour and layout of the inset
• make the plug larger