This is our draft 3 of our music video. When creating this draft we considered our teachers feedback that she gave to us after our draft 2. We used more shots from several different angles and changed some different transitions between shots. For this draft we asked our peers if they could review our video and ask for what was working positively and what we could do better.

Positive Feedback From Peers –

• They like our different use of shots and lighting within the performance section
• They like our use of transitions
• They think that our costumes work well
• Our use of location works well with our music video

Improvements From Peers – 

• We need to add more narrative to our music video
• We need to stabilize some of our shots
• We need to make sure that our lip-syncing always matches with the lyrics
• We need to make sure that our story through the narrative is clear to the audience