Here is my new and improved front page for my music magazine, the changes I have made are as follows:

• I added weight to the masthead and main cover line which is my main cover stars name (in white to add more boldness)
• I added a plug (Best selling indie music magazine,and the latest indie music and fashion) and captions including more artist features.
• I also enlarged the image of the main cover star.

Targets:

• Explore text placement for captions more
• Add issue no and price
• Make the plug ‘the latest indie music and fashion’ stand out more