Shown above is my complete magazine draft with below a screen cast which my teacher has made assessing my complete draft.
The feedback from my teacher overall included many targets and ideas of how I can make my magazine bolder, my targets for improvement are as follows:
Front cover
- Pull down plug,also only chose one plug as there are two.
- Masthead needs capital corrections
- Make main cover line bigger
- Add price and edition
- Photo adjusting: up contrast and twist image
Contents page
- Un strech pictures
- Break up the coverlines
- Fill up space at bottom
- Page number
- Suggestions: use plainer font, better photo for Louis, description underneath
Double page spread
- Photo is stretched, unstretch it
- Standfirst needs to be moved to article
- Add a drop capital at start
- Suggestions: Space out lines on quote, page umber higher
- Correct hyphens
Overall from my feedback I have a lot of tweaking to do in order for my magazine to be the best it can be.