Feedback – Draft 1 Front Cover, Contents, Double Page spread

Standard

For all of your FIRST DRAFTS you will get some feedback from one other member of the class. Your teacher will split you into pairs.

FEEDBACK

  • Show them your draft and then make sure they give you approximately 5 comments – it can be advice on what to do to improve and/or what they like about it.
  • Record this conversation as bullet points.

TARGETS

  • Collate 5 targets that you will need to address for your next draft and bullet point them.

AREAS TO COVER IN YOUR CONVERSATION/FEEDBACK:

  • Use of image and manipulation (photoshopped well?)
  • Use of appropriate MES for the star image/genre.
  • Masthead design and positioning.
  • Colour palette for the genre.
  • Appropriate use of font.
  • Layout of font and images – integration (wrap around image etc).
  • Does it look/feel like a music magazine?

FURTHER FEEDBACK

  • You can also include feedback from Ben, our tame graphic designer, to give you some advice and you can say in your post that you got feedback from a professional.
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