For all of your FIRST DRAFTS you will get some feedback from one other member of the class. Your teacher will split you into pairs.
FEEDBACK
- Show them your draft and then make sure they give you approximately 5 comments – it can be advice on what to do to improve and/or what they like about it.
- Record this conversation as bullet points.
TARGETS
- Collate 5 targets that you will need to address for your next draft and bullet point them.
AREAS TO COVER IN YOUR CONVERSATION/FEEDBACK:
- Use of image and manipulation (photoshopped well?)
- Use of appropriate MES for the star image/genre.
- Masthead design and positioning.
- Colour palette for the genre.
- Appropriate use of font.
- Layout of font and images – integration (wrap around image etc).
- Does it look/feel like a music magazine?
FURTHER FEEDBACK
- You can also include feedback from Ben, our tame graphic designer, to give you some advice and you can say in your post that you got feedback from a professional.