The draft 4 of my music video is the second to last process before it is finalised and put on my home page of my blog. I have inserted a clip below which represents my draft 4. Although there are many positive things about music video, there are also a collection of key points that need improving and for me to understand and apply myself to the factors of which need improving, my teacher & fellow peers kindly provided me with a screencastify of feedback regarding my music video.
Improvements (feedback from Miss Cobb & my fellow peers)
- Slow down the clip of the feet walking in.
- Scale and Offset Performance clips of Max.
- Play with colours, curves and contrast performance clips with the black & white gambling scenes.
- Minimise the amount of black screens.
- Slow down the gambling track scene.
- Organise the clips – drink, lay the table, drink, lay the table.
- Reduce the amount of performance slips.
- Understand the pace in the narrative.
- Cut the letter opening scene and integrate in a POV shot.
- Include some more gambling scenes.
- Scale in on the letter ripping.
- Make the clips of Max more dynamic.
- Make the clips correlate with the pace of edit.
- Cut the song.
- Edit to the beat.
With this feedback, I am going to use as much of my spare time as possible to ensure that all of these factors for improvement are completed and also integrated into my music video. This sort of feedback will enhance my knowledge regarding what makes a music video successful and also a range of skills will be used when editing my draft 4 further.