Pan’s Labyrinth Final Essay Feedback
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Overall my main areas I need to focus on are: capital letters, using different analysis words and the relationship within the film text. I want to try and not use the word show as often for my anlysis words. I also need to make sure that I use some more of the micro and make a few more points about why it was a conventional fantasy scene.
Targets :
Correct Capitals
More use of micro terminology
More links to the context of the film and themes to the mise-en-scene
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