We got our peers to fill in these questionnaires to get feedback for our draft 3 of our music video. This was helpful as our target audience is for teenagers and generally the video gained the preferred reading from the audience.

Positive Points:

• That they understood the idea of the doll and they found the mise-en-scene effective and visually interesting
• That the performance is upbeat and enthusiastic and the performers fit well with the generic expectations suggesting it created a predictable pleasure for the audience
• The location fit well with the genre and the lighting was effective throughout
• The fast paced edit was to the beat appropriate to the genre adding energy to the video
• The variety of shots were interesting and kept them engaged

Points For Improvement:

• A faster paced edit throughout to create even more energy to fit with the genre
• Possibly include a title screen in the video
• The camera flashes should fade in more
• Check the shots of the drummer as he is out of time and the sound does’t correlate with the images
• Use more closeups of the lead singer as she is the star and the best performer