Having now completed my contents page with all the information I wanted to include and having refined some existing material, I can now present a second draft of my contents page alongside a peer review recording in response to this.
In completing this, I also recorded a peer conversation/discussion responding to my contents page, following set questions.
From this response, I concluded that top further impove this page I should try to:
- Change the placement of on of the captions, currently on the model’s knee
- Colour correct the extra images on the lower half of the page to better blend with the overall colour scheme
- Bring out the word “Giveaway” in the title “November Giveaway”