Our group produced the first draft in which it showcased our thriller with narrative sense and a basic editing:

We also received feedback from our peers, this included things they thought were good and things we should seek the improve on. You can see the feedback in the document below:

I can see from the feedback that the match-on-action was good and the montage at the start was effective and delivered a purpose.

The feedback also gave us some targets we should aim to achieve:

  • Add colour correction to make it more mysterious
  • Shorten the walking shots to create more pace
  • Make the shot of Reece waling to the door make sense
  • Possibly try and use a different shot instead of the pan since it’s unsteady