For my first essay I think I did very well as I used several links to macro features as well as the contexts of the film. I also used key language throughout my essay to enhance it slightly. This got me a 21/28 which is equivilent to a high H6, nearly a H7. To improve for future I have made a small list of things I can improve upon.
EBI:
- Improve TEA paragraphs
- Give more detail on examples
- Fully flesh out points