Pitch + Feedback

For our teacher to have a full understanding of our music video ideas/concepts we had to make a pitch. In the pitch we talked about our ideas for the star image, narrative concept and performance concept.

Our Final Pitch

6x Positives

  • Our narrative has a good base of an idea.
  • We have a model/models who are willing to work with us.
  • Our mise-en-scene is strong.
  • A good plot that allows the audience to interpret our storyline in their own way.
  • Our group had good communication so we all know the narrative and mise-en-scene ideas.
  • We have considered the locations we will film at.

6x Goals

  • Use the ending of the story at the start of the music video to give the audience background of what is happening, has happened, or could happen.
  • Look into possible locations in depth.
  • Potentially think of more costumes – don’t use the same two as it could get boring.
  • Think about how and where we are going to film the performance/lip-syncing shots.
  • Consider camera angles more.
  • We need to be organized in order to film and get the shots we need to get with no hassle.

By showing our ideas and concepts to our teacher it has allowed our group to move forward with the video and have a clear vision of what ideas we need to keep and what else we can add. It has also allowed us to have experience of getting criticism and feedback from people and we have learnt how to move forward with the criticism we received.

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