This is our forth draft for our music video. We have made changes to the editing and video using the feedback our peers gave us for our third draft. We also sent this forth draft to our teacher in order to receive the final pieces of feedback which we can use to clean up the video and create a finished piece.
Some of the final tweaks our teacher suggested to us was to position and scale some of the performance shots, cut some of the flashing shots so that she is off center, last shot needs to be slower (slow motion), dialogue shots could be zoomed in. These were suggested to us as due to us doing more shoots and adding more footage it started to take over and not fully show the dark side of the artist; by doing these improvements it will help give the audience a bigger connection to the plot in order for them to understand the dark, manipulative side of the artist. The improvement of positioning and scaling some of the performance shots will benefit us as it will help vary the shots and create a bigger dynamic in the performance.