The Feedback we received  helped up to come up and change some of our ideas to help us make a better video. We spoke about how we will create an accurate star image and narrative that fits the genre. We also spoke about the narrative structure of our video and how we can get a variety of different angles to make an interesting narrative and performance sequence.

Targets

1.  to use various different locations
2. to have an actual band
3. to be able to show the loneliness of the main character well
4. to use abstract ways of creating a sense of loneliness and friendship
5. to make sure we all take part in the filming process
6.  to make sure we have a variety of narrative types